In the awesome pattern of things you secure a B- just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost me ended up being in your particulars. As as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more true at this point. Having said that, allow me say to you what exactly did deliver the results. The writing can be very persuasive and this is possibly why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can notice the leaps in reason you make, I am not necessarily confident of just how you seem to connect your points which in turn produce the actual final result. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your point however wish in the near future you actually connect your dots better.