In this awesome scheme of things you get a B+ for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually misplaced us was first in all the particulars. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more correct in this article. Having said that, allow me inform you just what did do the job. The article (parts of it) is actually pretty persuasive which is probably the reason why I am making the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can easily notice a leaps in reason you come up with, I am definitely not convinced of exactly how you seem to unite your points which produce your conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your issue however hope in the future you actually connect the dots much better.