In this amazing pattern of things you receive an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where you lost everybody was in all the facts. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more accurate right here. Having said that, let me say to you just what did work. The text is actually really convincing and that is possibly why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can easily see the jumps in reason you make, I am not necessarily sure of exactly how you appear to unite the details which inturn help to make your conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue however trust in the near future you actually connect the facts better.