Throughout this wonderful design of things you actually get a B- just for hard work. Where you lost me was first in all the details. As as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more true at this point. Having said that, let me tell you precisely what did do the job. Your text is definitely very persuasive and this is probably why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can notice the jumps in reasoning you make, I am definitely not sure of how you seem to connect the ideas which in turn produce your conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your position however wish in the future you connect your facts better.