Throughout the great design of things you secure a B- for effort. Where exactly you actually lost everybody was on your particulars. As as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more true here. Having said that, let me say to you precisely what did give good results. Your article (parts of it) is certainly very powerful and this is possibly the reason why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can certainly see a leaps in reason you come up with, I am not really confident of exactly how you seem to unite the points which produce your final result. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue however hope in the near future you actually link your dots much better.