Throughout this excellent design of things you'll get a B+ just for hard work. Where you confused me was first in all the details. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more true in this article. Having said that, let me say to you just what did work. Your writing can be rather powerful and this is possibly why I am making an effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, whilst I can see the jumps in logic you come up with, I am not really sure of how you seem to unite the ideas which inturn make the final result. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but wish in the near future you actually connect your dots much better.