Throughout this awesome pattern of things you get a B- just for effort. Where exactly you actually misplaced us was on all the specifics. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more accurate here. Having said that, let me tell you what exactly did deliver the results. The article (parts of it) can be pretty convincing which is probably the reason why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can see a jumps in logic you make, I am not necessarily convinced of just how you seem to connect your points which in turn help to make the conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your point however wish in the foreseeable future you connect your dots much better.