In the wonderful pattern of things you actually secure a B- for hard work. Where exactly you actually confused us was first in all the particulars. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more true at this point. Having said that, permit me tell you just what exactly did do the job. Your writing can be rather engaging and that is probably the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can see a jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not really confident of just how you appear to unite the points which in turn make your final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your point however trust in the foreseeable future you actually link the dots better.