Throughout the great pattern of things you'll get a B+ for effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost me ended up being on the details. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more accurate here. Having said that, let me say to you exactly what did give good results. Your article (parts of it) is highly engaging which is probably the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can easily see the leaps in logic you come up with, I am not confident of how you seem to unite your details which in turn produce the actual final result. For the moment I shall subscribe to your point however trust in the near future you actually link the dots much better.