In the wonderful scheme of things you actually receive a B- for hard work. Exactly where you confused me personally ended up being on all the details. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be much more true in this article. Having said that, allow me say to you what exactly did work. Your writing is certainly really persuasive and this is possibly the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can notice the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not really certain of how you appear to connect your points which in turn help to make the conclusion. For now I will subscribe to your issue but trust in the future you connect your dots much better.